"For your planned shots, maybe take some outside or in a different setting to lesson the photoshop load."
"The fonts are good but maybe add some some of the fonts that aren't so neat and ordered to make the magazine feel less formal."
"The magazine pitch is really good and explains in detail what will be included in your magazine."
"I love the magazine name 'Untouched' because it's different to all the rest of the market."
"The colour scheme and font ideas are really nice and appeal to your chosen audience."
"Your fonts have been well selected."
"Your reader profile gives me a really good idea about the kind of people who will be reading your magazine."
"Well thought out, shown a clear idea of the layout and fonts to be used. You have also given a really good idea of the kind of people who will read it."
"Your text and colour scheme have been well thought out. There is a good insight as to the different shots you're using."
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