"There's incorrect spelling and punctuation on the contents page and cover."
"The cover doesn't really have a proper layout."
"I think you need to centre the cover better, it's too juvenile."
"I don't like the underlining of the contents header."
"The drop capital on your double paged spread is a little too big."
"I don't like the picture effect you've used on the double page spread."
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